Planning: Audience Feedback (Contents Page)

I recently posted some updates of my contents page to a social networking site to gain some audience feedback. Note: The image below is a screenshot of the post that I shared on my social networking profile, and the screenshot shown here only shows two thirds of the magazine. The magazine that I used for the audience feedback can be seen in my three posts ago.

Audience Member 1

Audience Member 1 complimented the page.

There was not a lot of Audience Feedback for this page, except a few mistakes I forgot to change before uploading, so they were immediately spotted and changed.

My Media teacher said he likes it before I uploaded it, saying that the numbers that are integrated into the pictures were effective and delivered what is conventional of a music magazine contents page. Also, he said I needed more